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He was still smiling as he answered. “I could have, but I didn’t want to. I thought I’d try something a little reckless.”

“But you’re not the reckless type.” I argued.

“Perhaps not, but I wanted to try. You’re always being reckless with your safety.” He said in his defense. I couldn’t deny it, he made an excellent point. He stood up, towering over me as he usually did with his perfect marble body that was ice cold to the touch. “So why can’t I be reckless?” he asked.

“There’s nothing wrong with being reckless, it’s just…” I let my voice trail off.

“Just what?”

“It’s just that you’re usually so cautious with my safety. I’m still so breakable, so fragile and weak. Why haven’t you changed me yet?” I demanded. I wanted an answer, and I wanted it now. I wasn’t going to have any excuses, I wanted him to explain himself, give me good reasoning as to why I was still soft and warm.

“I’m not sure if I’m ready yet. I know you are, but I’m not sure about myself. I just don’t want to lose you, I’m afraid I might kill you.”

“So I’d tell you to stop when I felt it had been enough. And then you just lock me in one of the rooms for three days, and then teach me to hunt after animals instead of humans.” I said, wanting him to listen to me. And I was pleased that he was genuinely listening to me, taking in every word I said. This made me the happiest I’d been that day.

“I don’t mind that idea. But somehow the idea of locking you in a room for three days terrifies me. Now come on, why don’t we have some fun? Victoria is dead and never coming after you again, the Volturi won’t harm you because they won’t be able to find us. Swim with me.”

“Alright.” I finally agreed.

He smiled and kissed my cheek. He backed away a little bit, turned, and dove into the nice cool water. I followed him for a few steps, scooping water up in my hands and letting the water run down my arms. I looked around me, expecting him to pop up somewhere to try and take me by surprise. Then I heard a small splash of water behind me, I turned and there he stood, glistening and smiling at me with those beautiful golden eyes.

“I thought you were going to come under.” He said in that beautiful and sultry voice of his.

“I’m preparing myself.”

“Come on, have some fun.” He scooped me up in his strong arms and ran further out into the lake like the water didn’t exist, the water that would push back and normal person. But I guessed that being a vampire, water didn’t have quite the same effect on him. “Take a breath.” He instructed. I did as he said and the second I did he dove underwater with me still in his arms.

When I opened my eyes I was being pushed against cold hard chest from the speed and the force of the water. I could tell that he was enjoying the rush because his muscles tensed; he looked down at me and put his lips to mine. My lungs had been replenished with new air, and all I could taste was mint. We sped past fish and other life that existed in the depths of the lake. It was beautiful. I had never seen anything like this, not even in an aquarium where you were surrounded by tanks with all the sea life in them. This was about a thousand times better than that. It was like a dream, a dream that I wouldn’t want to end. But it wasn’t a dream, no, it was much better, this was reality, and only reality that seems like a dream can truly overcome the power of a pleasant dream.

And being with Edward made it even better. My vampire and me, our happiness, this magical experience that he was giving me while I was still human. It was wonderful; I never wanted it to end. But more than likely, it was going to end at some point; he’d have to take me back above water to let me breathe normally. He put his lips to mine again to replenish my lungs. I seemed to be getting over the dizzying effect of his lips, but they still made any moment more magical than what it actually was, or needed to be.

He didn’t open his mouth, clearly not wanting water to flow into him, for that would surely have an effect even on a vampire. The next thing I knew we burst out of the water in the middle of the lake, our heads just floating above the water.

“Now tell me, what did you think of that?” he asked, hoping that I had enjoyed it.

“Different. But a good different. I certainly enjoyed it.”

“That’s good. Because I only want you to enjoy the time that we have alone together.” He put his lips to mine in a kiss, holding me tight, but not too tightly as he didn’t want to hurt me. As he kissed me one thought ran through my mind, please turn me into a vampire. I wanted to spend eternity with him, was that so wrong to ask for?

“Edward…” I said when he pulled away to see my smiling face. “I love you.”

“And I love you Bella. Now I have another question for you.”

“Yes?”

“Do you want me to start the transformation tonight?”

My heart caught in my throat, I couldn’t speak. I didn’t know what to say. Instead of speaking, I merely nodded my head yes.
Part 2 of Bella and Edward's Honeymoon.

MAJOR EDIT
OKAY, THIS IS JUST DRIVING ME NUTS! People, I know I said back when I originally posted this that I wasn't going to do a part 3, but after seeing how much people like the story, I'm working on Part 3. It's still under development and seriously shakey since I'm having trouble writing the scene everybody wants in the next book. I know I want it too, but it's trying to keep it from being cheesy or anything like in the old vampire films. So that will be something to look forward to. And I'm going to keep it going until I have a grand total of 2 WEEKS OF HONEYMOON posted. So that means there will be much more and with my ideas. Okay? So please, stop asking about part 3, and it will be posted when it's done.

Part 1: [link]
Part3: [link]

Thank you for all the views, faves, and comments for part 1, I wasn't expecting it to be that popular.

Twilight series, Bella, Edward (C) Stephenie Meyer
Honeymoon Idea (C) ~Midnight-Dark-Angel
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kaykaylan Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wow all i can say is wow you are amazing oops i said more than wow
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Wolfgirl-Lover Featured By Owner May 8, 2009
the ending was really unexpected, in a good way:D
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girlwithtalentOB Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2008
for a minute , i thought did u copy this from the book? No. GOOD JOB!
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avatarded2010 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2008
Yay!
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tomboy309309 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2008
I can't wait for part 3!!!! don't forget he has to one thing before he can change her....;)
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Terra-Rebelia Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008
So amazing!:love: It's exactly what I want to happen in Breaking Dawn and this is exactly how I want it! it's perfect! AMazingly done! Can't wait for part 3!!!!!!!! :love:
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2008  Professional General Artist
Thank you very much! :blush: Part 3 is taking me longer than I thought it would, but then again part 2 took a long time to come out after part 1... hope you're a patient person.
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VeggieGirl15 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008
:wow: This is amazing! :+fav: Is part 3 almost done? (Sorry, I know you said not to ask, but I can't help it! :XD:)
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2008  Professional General Artist
It's, about a third done, at least so far... I had writer's block for a while >< Hopefully I can work on it more soon, now that my creative juices are flowing again.
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Horseluver411 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2008   Writer
WOOO!!! This is good keep going!!!!!!!!!!! The end is a cliff hanger and it's driving me nuts!
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2008  Professional General Artist
Part 3 is being worked on. It will be done!
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Horseluver411 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2008   Writer
can't wait. :hug:
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ToxinFang Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2008
I love your story! And I can't wait for part 3. :heart:
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2008  Professional General Artist
Thanks. Part 3 is giving me some trouble, but I will get it up!
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ToxinFang Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008
Great!
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CaitlanCopacetic Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2008   Photographer
oh wow, you did a great job with this.
Your writing sounds almost exactly like Stephenie's. I love itl.
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2008  Professional General Artist
Thank you very much :blush:
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vampiramoon Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2008
grrrrrrr i cant beleve you did a clifhanger. i thout we all worshiped the book and all wanted for him to change bella... but you hold that power and you stop?????!!!!! WTF... its simple... they go to the cabin... he bites her... does she feel pain? pleashuer?? nothing???!!!. people will kill for this info... and you STOP........

(Its hoples now im going off on you for my frustration over the books F***ing A (Anger)
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2008  Professional General Artist
I guess I should change that I'm doing a part 3. I'm sorry to have upset you. It's just that at the time when I posted this I had absolutely no idea how to write the next scene or anything, but now I do and part 3 is being written at the moment. It's under development still, but it will be posted.

I don't like cliffhangers either, and I didn't mean to do one and I do wish he would change Bella. It's just trying to figure out the scene without making it one of those cheesy ones from the old films and whatnot. I do apologize once again. *bows*
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vampiramoon Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2008
thank you sooooooo much sory for the ranting, but i do that often


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i talk to inanamate obgects
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lX-0 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2008
PLEASE write more i have read like 20 cliffies 2 day and i am getting depressed *tear, tear*:ohnoes: i realy want 2 Hear more from you cuz your story matches their real peorsonalies the best out of like all of the 20 fanfics i have read 2 day so please write more soon plz plz plz plz plz plz i will D.I.E :omfg:
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2008  Professional General Artist
I decided about 7 days after posting this to do part 3 because of the demand. So part 3 will be posted. And thank you for your opinion.
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lX-0 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2008
yah! ^ ^ :love:
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Etta147 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2008
this was so good! I can't wait til the next one!

check out my story too, it starts right after eclipse. its the only story i have so just go to my page if you'd like.
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dreamingofdarkmagic Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008
It was really, really good. Can't wait for the 3rd!
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MaxTheWolf542 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2008
omg!!! please tell me theres a part three!!! i want to see what you make of the change!!!
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2008  Professional General Artist
There will be a third. I'm only writing one because of the demand.
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bamba6 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2008
i loved it. what a great job!

will there be a third? i wanna know what happend next!
haha
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2008  Professional General Artist
Yeah, because of the demand a third is being written.
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bamba6 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2008
yay! I'm happy. lols.
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X-xMarceyx-X Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2008
YOU CAN'T STOP NOW!!!! come on!!!! this is gonna kill me now:(*Sighs* i guess i could let my mind wonder a lil to occupy my desires...ha ha jk!!!

but yeah i hope you will find out what to write for the next part i reall wanna know if he changes her that nite or not......if he survives it...if she survives it!!
ahhhh....gah...ok. well yeah that was and absolutly amazing story!!!!!!!!
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2008  Professional General Artist
Well, due to the demand of the story, and how popular it is I'm writing a third part, its tricky since I initially didn't want to write it... but it will be done.

I don't know if I'll have him turn her in the next part or not, maybe...
And thank you. Everyone seems to love it.
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X-xMarceyx-X Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2008
yeay!! im excited now! he he

i'm sure that youll do great no matter what you decide to do with the plot from there...its bound to be great!

lookin forward to it:D
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NicoletteZephyr Featured By Owner May 25, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It is sO amazing, even though I think Edward would take his sweet time. I love this idea, though! Lovely writing!
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner May 25, 2008  Professional General Artist
Thank you very much. I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I'm working on a part 3 because of the demand for it.
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NicoletteZephyr Featured By Owner May 25, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awww, I'm so excited, even though I just read it! Your writing is so amazing.
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner May 25, 2008  Professional General Artist
Oh wow thank you.
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NicoletteZephyr Featured By Owner May 27, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:)
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PiX-iC Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008
wow! u sound exactly like stephenie meyers writing!!!!! on part 1 I miss read the part where she took her shirt and shorts off, because she had her swim suit under........i thought they were gonna have sex in the water or something!!!!!!!!!! lol!!!!!!!
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008  Professional General Artist
i do? i sound exactly like her writing? oh crap! thank you very much! yeah, i was considering having them do that... sex in the water... but nah.... not the way my mind thinks for straight couples.... only with my yaoi really...
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PiX-iC Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008
haha lol!!!!
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1994babe Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2008
you have no idea how annoying it is that this is the end.. I WANT MORE!!!!
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2008  Professional General Artist
well, i'm considering doing a third part... mostly because this and the first part are so popular.
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1994babe Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2008
PLEASE please do more... *on knees begging*
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2008  Professional General Artist
okay, thats it. because everyone wants me to do a third part, I will.
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1994babe Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2008
YYYAAAAAYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thankyou , i'll be waiting for it!
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Elphie707 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2008
i hope theres more
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manateelover32232 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2008
do you have a third out yet?? that was AwEsOmE!!!
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AlikatPunkRocker Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2008  Student Photographer
Squee! ^^
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xoxo--Sashlee--oxox Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2008
yay!:w00t:
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