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It wasn’t until later that night when the creatures of the night, owls and other normal animals came out, and Edward had disappeared into the next room. He had me slip into something sensual. What was he planning to do? Was this sort of thing really necessary for turning me into a vampire? I looked down at the nightie that Alice had given me as a wedding present; it was a little see-through and was a pale pink and a bit frilly in some places. I sat there patiently on the bed, waiting for him to come back into the bedroom. I looked out the window onto the moonlit lake, the water was as smooth as glass and I could see the faint silhouettes of ducks going across, creating small ripples.

I heard the door creak and whipped my head around to find Edward standing in the doorway, his beautiful marble chest fully exposed, with a pair of black jeans on with the fly undone slightly. He leaned against the doorframe with one hand, a smile gracing his lips. My breath was taken away as I continued to stare at this vision of perfection before me. I snapped back to normal as he approached me, pushing me back down onto the bed, and gently laying on top of me.

“I thought I’d do something else, before changing you.” He said so seductively.

“And what might that be?” I enquired.

“Well, I remember you saying that you wanted this…” he gently slid his cold hand under the nightie, touching my soft sensitive skin there, making me arch my back a little and squirm. His fingertips ran along my side to softly cup my breast; his intimacy was surprising, especially since he had flinched away the first time.

“Yes, I did… and I still do… a little…”

“Only a little?” he gave a light squeeze and pressed his lips to mine, cupping my face in his other hand, I couldn’t take it though, I ended up losing consciousness from this contact, it was all too sensual. I was in disbelief. How he could love me, and be so sensual right now I would have loved to know.

When I woke up a little while later the moonlight was shining into the bedroom and the candles were still aglow, burning bright and golden. I looked to my right to see that Edward was laying there beside me, he’d been watching me sleep again.

“Is everything alright now Bella?” he asked in that velvet voice of his.

“Yes.” I replied quickly. I gave him a smile and gave him a kiss in return since I had passed out earlier.

“Do you want me to start the transformation?” he asked me. The fact that he was going to do it, and that it was now almost frightened me. But it was what I wanted most. I nodded my head and he sat up, swinging his legs over the edge of the bed. He patted the spot beside him for me to move and sit there. He pushed my hair back to the other side of my neck; I held it tightly so that it would not move. I felt his cool breath on the skin, and then his tongue lightly licking it. I let out a soft sigh at the feeling, it was so alien to me but pleasurable at the same time. I felt two sharp fangs graze the spot then, gently, almost as if they were afraid to go through.

“Edward…”

“Bella… if I hurt you, I wouldn’t blame you if you never forgave me.” he said this almost sadly.

“There’d be nothing to forgive…” I had more confidence than I expected. It was so unusual.

He gave a soft sigh on my neck and slowly and carefully sank his teeth into my neck. I flinched at the feeling, a sharp pain shooting through my body. My body tensed as his fangs dug a little bit deeper, but then I felt as though something were pouring into me. But what was it? I felt so strange and queasy, I felt like I was going to pass out again. But I had to stop Edward before he took too much blood, I knew of his thirst for it as he had found the smell of it irresistible.

I struggled to push him off of my neck before he took too much. I pushed at his own instead of his chest, he pulled away to allow some of my blood to slide down my neck to my chest. I took a cloth from the nearby dresser and put it over it to stop the bleeding. But the moment I did that I made a scratchy hiss, as more pain shot through me. I crumpled to the floor, my head hitting the wooden floor with a hard thud. I felt Edward’s arms wrap around me as he carried me to the bed and set me down on the soft mattress. He held me close to his body, he knew that I wouldn’t hurt him even if I tried, I might be able to in a few days. The days that I had been longing for since I knew that he loved me.
Going into :iconthetwilightclub:

I know I don't normally post writing in here anymore, but this story is a special circumstance.

Okay, yeah. Breaking Dawn, book 4 of the Twilight series came out August 2nd and I so have to read it! And this is part 3 of a fanfic I started almost a year ago.

This is really for all the people who wanted me to write part 3, and it took almost as long to write, fix, proofread, and refix as part 2. So to all you people, I hope you're happy with it. I know I am, and I will write a fourth part if you want me to. But I need it to be in high enough demand for me to write it just so you know.

Also, I'm thankful to the people who wanted me to write this, because I've never written this kind of scene before, so it was a learning experience for me.

Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]

Thank you for all the views, faves, and comments for my little story, I wasn't expecting it to be that popular. A thousand thank yous to everyone *bows*

Twilight series, Bella, Edward (C) Stephenie Meyer
Honeymoon Idea (C) ~Midnight-Dark-Angel
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meeeee7078 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student Artist
wow but one thing he has strong human teeth not fangs. the fact they don't have fangs is the only thing wrong with him.  would you mind kissing a fanged mouth?
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Fangs2Go Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
More? I love it so much!
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Professional General Artist
There will never be more... sorry.
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meeeee7078 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student Artist
write more
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Professional General Artist
I've long since fallen out of the Twilight fandom. The 4th part won't be posted unless people want to read something that isn't finished.
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meeeee7078 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student Artist
i don't mind you left me on edge. KEEP POSTING THEM WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
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Fangs2Go Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012
D: naw man, it's fine :P
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Professional General Artist
I'm glad you understand. Most start nagging because I won't write more.
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Fangs2Go Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Hahaha, no, it's your choice :) And that's not fun to handle
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Quiintero Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Digital Artist
plllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write more
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:iconmidnight-dark-angel:
Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011  Professional General Artist
no
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twihard97 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011
YOU HAVE TO MAKE A FOURTH ONE!!!!!!!PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ...!!!!!
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011  Professional General Artist
No. I'm not writing anymore. The story is dead. I have no love for Twilight anymore.
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maddyline1998 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really, this is good. What do you have against a Part 4? Everyone's asking for it!
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2011  Professional General Artist
Everyone may be asking for it, but I've fallen out of the fandom for the most part. So I don't really want to write more of it.
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19K93 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011
i love it! :D
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beckywecky94 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011
this is amazing please write a 4th part.
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:iconmidnight-dark-angel:
Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Professional General Artist
I announced last year I won't be writing a fourth part.
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beckywecky94 Featured By Owner May 14, 2011
awwww man :( i realy love this story.
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VampTeen83 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I need more!!! OMG!!! This is great!!! Part 4!! Please!
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ElleCullen17 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011
YOU NEED TO WRIGHT A FOURTH BELLA'S AND EDWARDS HONEYMOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!STAT!

~ElleCullen
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Dralion97 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is Amazing. I love the detail you put in it. It's almost like Steph had written it herself
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XBAlyHooX Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
u should do a part 4
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CullenEyes Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2009
I REALLY hope there will be a part 4! This story is amazing!!!
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SchuylerAlice Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
please,please,please write and nother one it's so diffrent from the book it's good....
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Biffl Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009
yay cant wait for part 4 :P
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Brooke360 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009
u want high demand? ok... u asked for it. WRITE PART FOUR RIGHT NOW BEFORE I STAB SOMEONE IN THE FACE. I MEAN IT. I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN IF I HAVE TO.
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Professional General Artist
I've been working on it. And if people keep going on about part 4, I'm never going to post it.
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Brooke360 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009
hey, ur the one who asked for high demand. and im sorry, but ur story is freaking awesome!
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009  Professional General Artist
Yes, but it's getting to the point of ridiculous.
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zinnet556 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Student Digital Artist
u should write a 4th. IT WAS SOOO GOOD. cant wait if ya do. :woohoo:
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hypermee Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2009  Student Photographer
PART 4 FOR THE WORLD!!! AND MORE IMPORTANTLY, FOR ALL THE AWESOME PPL WHO WANT A PART 4!! :D
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Cullenluvr-aliceluvr Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2009
write 4 LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


you NEEEEEEEEEd to write a 4th
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2009  Professional General Artist
I've been working on it...

And have given up.
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Cullenluvr-aliceluvr Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2009
O kk
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2009  Professional General Artist
So there won't be a part 4 most likely...
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katiana13babii Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2009
youo have to rite #4! i love your stories and they're amzingly close to the breakind dawn book!! btw my fave boook is breaking dawn... so i think it will be enteresting to see how you write the book from your point of veiw of bella!!!
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Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2009  Professional General Artist
It's just the honeymoon I'm writing. Though part 4's been underway for months now (I keep re-working it)
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katiana13babii Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009
that sounds good tell me when its finished!
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fliegen1 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009
cant wait till number four
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foreverbeginstoday Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
oh please do a #4
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:iconmidnight-dark-angel:
Midnight-Dark-Angel Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009  Professional General Artist
I'm already working on it, I'm just having a hard time with it...
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foreverbeginstoday Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
horray :) well good luck
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Artslavist Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I vote for a #4
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ezmurelda Featured By Owner May 30, 2009
niceee.... would luvs to read 4
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Kactress Featured By Owner May 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
cant wait for part 4 :)
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AliceCullenLuvn Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009
HURRY UP WITH FOUR PLEASEEEEEEE
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inuyasharules71 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009  Student General Artist
so cute story
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kittinasarea Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2009
beautiful...really!!!i can't wait for the 4 part!!!so let's do it!!!!
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shiella-emerald Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2009
that was really, really good. i would love to read read a part four.
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